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  ~Raw and Rebellious~
her eyes burning intensely,
  
they had all turned her in,
 
for her there was no end,
  
her mind gambling the stakes,
   
wondering which route to take,
  
tears of hate crawled down her face,
   
while she though of a way to be,
     ~Raw and Rebellious~
©2008-2009 ~RebelAngel17
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Something I did in english, and I haven't posted anything lately, so I thought I'd add this. Please let me know what you think. :hug:

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Yey! New stuff! :w00t!: Short but sweet, with a hint of something vindictive! Awesome as always!:glomp:
I can picture this girl being thrust out the front of a group and everyone blaming her.
The lines: 'tears of hate crawled down her face' is so powerful. I can't wait for the next one! :heart: :aww:

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:bulletpurple: :bulletblue: ~Twilight-FIRE-n-ICE - Art inspired by the Saga :bulletblue: :bulletpurple:
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Love the image that puts in my head.
Reminds me of the ever-famous "Rebel without a Cause" stuff.

The only thing I'm doing in English at the moment is reading through the Lord of the Flies.
Not that I don't like the book or anything ~ the teachers just a little boring at time ~XD

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Keep the good stuff coming ;)


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Emotions turning back on themselves
and not leading on, to thought or action,

is the element of madness.
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Thank you muches deary:hug:

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}Consider yourself :hug:&:kiss:{
:iconrebelangel17:
Thank yous:)

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}Consider yourself :hug:&:kiss:{
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Emotions turning back on themselves
and not leading on, to thought or action,

is the element of madness.
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