~Raw and Rebellious~
her eyes burning intensely,
they had all turned her in,
for her there was no end,
her mind gambling the stakes,
wondering which route to take,
tears of hate crawled down her face,
while she though of a way to be,
~Raw and Rebellious~















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I can picture this girl being thrust out the front of a group and everyone blaming her.
The lines: 'tears of hate crawled down her face' is so powerful. I can't wait for the next one!
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Reminds me of the ever-famous "Rebel without a Cause" stuff.
The only thing I'm doing in English at the moment is reading through the Lord of the Flies.
Not that I don't like the book or anything ~ the teachers just a little boring at time ~XD
Keep the good stuff coming
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