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My EverLasting by ~RebelAngel17:iconRebelAngel17:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


                                    We where joined together when it happened,
                                                 and have not parted since.
                                           You did not want me in the beginning,
                                                 but gave up as time slipped.
                                            We have been together every night,
                                                   but never during the day.
                                       Oh how I love to taunt you in the evenings,
                                               and haunt you in your dreams.
                               So as I lay here by your side I shall whisper ever so light
                            "Please do fear my love for I am your Everlasting nightmare".
©2007-2008 ~RebelAngel17
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Just a small little something I wroute after a test at school, injoy, though it may be small, and total crap.
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~midnightrose1001:iconmidnightrose1001: Nov 5, 2007, 7:14:25 PM
Absolutely amazing!!!

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You'll never realize how easily you make me smile...

and how every song reminds me of you...
~RebelAngel17:iconRebelAngel17: Nov 6, 2007, 6:27:21 AM
Thank you so muches babe, I didn't think anyone would Fav. it. It's not my best, but it's something. Have a lot of :hug:&:kiss: for being the first one the comment it, and for being a good friend:) Thanks agine babe.

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}Insanity hun, we all have it{
}Consider yourself :hug:&:kiss:{
:blackrose:
~tears4everfalling:icontears4everfalling: Nov 6, 2007, 11:38:11 AM
It has a nice little flow.
Almost something you'd like to sing in that childhood tone..

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So I'll wait for you to take me all away...

I'm so sorry...

~EmoMafia
~RebelAngel17:iconRebelAngel17: Nov 6, 2007, 5:15:22 PM
Thank you so muches babe, it means so much to me that someone as good as you Fav. it. Muches of :hug:&:kiss: to you I hope I pass out.

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}Insanity hun, we all have it{
}Consider yourself :hug:&:kiss:{
:blackrose:
~midnightrose1001:iconmidnightrose1001: Nov 6, 2007, 9:04:46 PM
Welcome =D

Of course I was going to fav this. This is better than anything I could ever do

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You'll never realize how easily you make me smile...

and how every song reminds me of you...
~Layalas:iconLayalas: Nov 7, 2007, 10:05:47 AM
Very good flow ~ this compliments a book I'm reading so well :)

I like it ~ well done.
You're making me look slightly bad now ~ I haven't uploaded anything in weeks ^^;

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~ Elven Maiden of Dragons ~

~ There is a darkness is us all...
The difference comes when trying to master it ~
~tears4everfalling:icontears4everfalling: Nov 7, 2007, 11:56:45 AM
Haha
You're welcome.
dont give me all the :hug: & :kiss: though.You'll need some for the other great friends you've got on here!:)

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So I'll wait for you to take me all away...

I'm so sorry...

~EmoMafia
~RebelAngel17:iconRebelAngel17: Nov 7, 2007, 7:04:43 PM
Liarer, but thanks.:)

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}Insanity hun, we all have it{
}Consider yourself :hug:&:kiss:{
:blackrose:
~RebelAngel17:iconRebelAngel17: Nov 7, 2007, 7:08:12 PM
Thank you muches babe:) And I don't think I could ever put anyone to shame, I'm not so gut.
:hug:&:kiss: to ya!

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}Insanity hun, we all have it{
}Consider yourself :hug:&:kiss:{
:blackrose:
~RebelAngel17:iconRebelAngel17: Nov 7, 2007, 7:10:13 PM
Don't worry hun, I have more than enough to share:)

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}Insanity hun, we all have it{
}Consider yourself :hug:&:kiss:{
:blackrose:
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